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Version 102
小作文：分析DIFFERENT ENTERTAINMENT的，难的是时态，有1970、1990和2010的。
大作文：最近我门面对越来越多的汽车，步行人和骑自行车的人越来越危险，而且，
许多花园要当作被建公路和高速公路的祭品了，问你怎么样才是最好的办法让每个居
民都满意？
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V102修改

These days, it seems that we have more and more cars in our society. As a result,
driving bicycles or walking on road is less safe now. Anymore, many gardens
and lawns have been placed by roads and highways, just for automobile
driving. It's really a great pity, but is there anything way can do to change this
situation?

In my opinion, developing faster and more convenient public transportation
system is the most urgent thing, especially those beyond or under the ground.
If everyone can get to his target place easily, fast and economically, who will
prefer driving by himself? So it will certainly reduce the number of automobiles
on the road and thus efficiently minimize the traffic accidents caused by cars.
We can take the subway system as an good example, because it has its own
underground railway, it seldom bring accidents to walkers and bicycle drivers
and has no need to destroy our gardens or lawns in construction.

On the other side, issuing higher taxes on private cars or increase the fuel price
maybe also effective. It will reduce people's desire to buy their own cars. By
limiting the amount of private automobiles, together with the developed public
transportation system, there will be less cars on the road, then the need of
constructing more roads and highways will automatically disappear. Of course,
we can limit the number of private cars by laws and many other ways. But the
aim is the same.

In a word, limiting the number of private cars as we develop our public
transportation system is the right answer.
   
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