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发信人:   synyan(孤单一吻)

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V97.Some people regard animals as the source of food or clothes, and others
think that they should be treated like pets. State your opinion from both sides.
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An （argument occasionally）OCCASIONALLY ARGUMENT these days is that some
people often regard the animals as their pets while others think the animals are
only the resources of foods and furs. As far as I am concern, I can't totally agree
with （both two）EITHER.

It first comes to the point that I believe animals are equal to us human bei
ngs. We must not butcher them freely only because we want to get useful
resources without continence. Nowadays, more and more kinds of animals are
becoming unable to survive, What's worse, it is beyond our prediction that （most）
HOW MANY SPECIES of them disapeared and never exist on our planet.

On the other hand, excessively coshering up animals as pets may cause very
serious problems such as diseases and injuries.Horrible diseases ,for example
rabie,are mainly spreaded by pet cats and dogs.Although the pets can
sometimes give people comfort and solace in their mind, we are not sure whether
the pets will gnaw or bite us in future. One pet-（injury）INJURING accident reported
lately is THAT  a lovely poodle bit（ away）OFF its master's nose（. It looks like）WHEN
the master,a young lady, wanted to kiss her dog.

The last but not the least reason of this issue is that many dangerous wild
animals are fed in large cities and mass density accommodations. You can
even imagine talking with your eccentric neighbour with his 'big cat' - a
crouching Malaysia tiger!

All in all, there are a lot of differences between us and animals especially
wild ones . We should protect them, without making us too close to
them.
感觉最后一句不是很好，最好不要写偏激，尖锐的东西    
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