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独家点评2010年2月7日托福独立写作

  真题回放:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

  名师点评:本题按照题材分类属于” 做事方式类”类,在题库中与此相类似的题目有:

  Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

  点评:这篇文章对于学生们来说相对比较困难, 因为文章的立意和论据需要学生有一定的生活阅历。

  解析:本文题材依然延续了观点选择类 即投票题目,此类题目要求观点一定要明确,并对自己的观点进行论述,由于题目本身具有一定难度。因此正文段可以采用2-1结构即两段正面充分论证和一段让步论证的三个分论点。

  开头段:

  背景描述+表明观点

  世界越来越小(the globalization )使得个人的行为和思想得以无限的放大(like the magnifying glass)。因此作为生活在新时代的80后(born in 80s),我们的生活不仅影响了自己更加影响了这个时代(influence)。那么我们是应该与时俱进(advance with the times and people)还是标新立异(create something new and original to make yourself different)呢?as a member of the generation, I assume that we should do things more like others, and,briefly, the argument is as follows.

  正文段:

  第一段, firstly, 80后的年轻人很多都处于30岁以下,这样的年龄无论在物质上还是精神上都不具备成功的资源(most beneath 30,we generation not only own material but also psychic resource)。而我们前辈(predecessor )或同辈们(peer)已经为我们树立了榜样。所以我们可以借鉴别人的道路和方法前进(short cut),这样可以使我们走很多弯路.。(举例法)

  第二段, Secondly, 如果我们能够听取他人的意见或者获得与他人相似的成功曾更容易得到他人的认同和支持。可以通过举例子,例如现在的大学生创业set up in business as a bookseller,我们可以借鉴他人的创业机制(Business mechanism),从事已经被验证的事业可以更容易获得成功。如果标新立异则可能会遇到被别人误解的尴尬,例如最近的网络红人罗玉凤。(假设法)

  第三段, Although, different ideas and behavior虽然会短时间内(temporary)会获得瞬间的名誉(reputation)但是只是迎合了人们的猎奇心理(curiosity),after a long while, 人们就会淡忘,所以只求新颖只会让自己陷入困境。(让步段)

  结尾段

  重申观点

  We should peruse the business that somebody has made a model for us.