主题句+拓展句123+结尾句(升华、过渡)
因果解释1现象引出;2原因分析;3结果分析
Currently ..现象..has loomed up wide public concern what amazes us most is that..具体..It is true that the trend of this is seemly on the rise in all walks of life.We may cite a variety of reasons accounting for this.The major ones can be listed as follows.First and foremost....plays a pushing role.In addition...Last but not least...As a consequence...
段落举例:Juvenile delinquency
Nowadays. Juvenile delinquency has become a focal point under discussion.What amazes us most is that the forms of JD vary from stealing robbing to murdering.It is true that the trend of this is on the rise. We may cite a variety of reasons accounting for this adolescent crimes. First and foremost, the mass media plays a key role .In other words,children are frequently exposed to shows and reports about crime and violence. In addition,children in China are often pampered and spoilt by their parents.Last but not least,today’s children have to face a more tempting world than ever before.As a consequence they are prone to commit crimes
论述体系(问题解决):1.描述现状;2.建议措施
With the advancement of modern society....has become a social problem of public concern.Meanwhile,it has given rise to a serious of other matters.Such as A and B.So it is high time we put an immediate end to this “Pandora’s box”.It is true that awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution.As is known to all,we have figured out several efficacious steps to tackle this problem.In the first place....In the second place....In the third place....Therefore ,only in this way can we...
段落举例: Income gap
Recently the income gap has become a social problem of public concern.Meanwhile,it has given rise to series of other matters.Such as delinquency and violence.So it is high time we put an immediate end to this “Pandora’s box”.It is true that awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution.In the first place we should appeal to the government to improve the distribution mechanism.Making it not only transparent but also reasonable during economic development.More emphases should be plased on the underprivileged group of the society especially in these backward areas.Therefore only in this way can we build a more harmonious socirty.
观点论证行论述体系(个人类话题通用) 1.含义提示;2.含义解析
As a human being one can hardly do without....Living in the society,no one can deny that it is...that enables us to....Consequently,in this modern society where.... ....has been ragarded as a necessity for....As to what....means,my opinions/definitions are as follows.First of all.....What really counts in my mind is that....Lastly,.....
段落举例: Perseverance
As a human being one can hardly do without perseverance.Living in the society no one can deny that it is perseverance that enables us to accomplish wonders and realize dreams.Consequently in this modern society where competition is becoming increasingly fierce.Perseverance has been regarded as a necessity for a successful career.As to what perseverance means my opinion are as follows.First of all,perseverance means the determination to hold on to the end.Even in the face of difficult and dangerous situations,what really counts,in my mind is that man with perseverance firmly believes what he has chosen is right and meaningful so he is more than happy to fight for his ideal and will never ever give up.Lastly no man was born with perseverance.Only after life’s countless challenges can he understand the genuine meaning of perseverance.
独立写作论证方法
(一) 举例1.Paragons,such A and B,respectively come immediately to my mind...
2.While such cases are rare,they do occur occasionally. A case in point ralates to Sb in the field of...
(二) 引用
1. As a saying goes”.....”which is to say....
2. According to a well-known scientist ....and I paraphrase ...in other words....
3. ..名言..such is remark of ..Sb..,one of the best-known scientist
(三) 数据调查
According to the statistical result of a recent survey A and B have soared respectively by...and...In contrast C declined at an accelerating rate,and it is also the case with D.The statistical result illustrates that....
(四) 反证法 with A...without A...
(五) 类比和对比Similarity,by the same token....(同理可证)
In like manner(同样的) likewise
In contrast
On the contrary
BEGINING
一.A or B
When it refers to...people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial issue (AorB) It is commonly accept that...others however,like the negative attitude.In my opinion of view.I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.
二.表态类
.....?The discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come to vogue during the last decade.The statement declares that.....However,I disagree with the statement, and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view.
三.列举式开头
Nowadays...has loomed up wide public concern.What amazes us most is that....Among countless factors,which directly or indirectly influence...There are several conspicious aspects as follows.