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  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making process.

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  Leaders play a profound role in the success of a group. Due to this, the strategy of a leader is at the frontline of public debate. So there is a controversy whether effective leaders should let group members feel they participated in the process of decision making or not. From my point of view, good leaders should try to make group members feel they are part of the process of decision making. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point.

  First of all, making others feel that they participate in decision making can promote the relationship between the leader and group members. There are many situations in which a leader adopt the advice from others or even just listen patiently to their ideas that make the group members feel respected, and the group members then will become more close to the leader. In this case, the work will be done much easier, since the group can work more cooperatively. For instance, I am working as a department minister in our college’s Student Union. There is once the time when my group and I were designing a new website for our college. I accepted one of my team members’ suggestions about a creative change, then they become more active and we worked within a good atmosphere.

  Secondly, it can increase the belongingness of the group if the group members feel involved them in the decision making. It is needless to say that people doing their own tasks much more careful than doing other people’s tasks. The more they feel their belongingness to a group, the better they can deal with the issues and the better results they can achieve. To put this point in to an actual context, consider you are going to move to a new apartment to live with a friend, and the apartment is in a mess because your roommate is very busy with work at the time. What will you do? You probably clean the room yourself because you believe this is your home too. On the contrary, Will you do that if you are not going to live there?

  To put all in a nut shell, effective leaders will be sensible enough to let his guys feel they are working with an intimate partner for themselves.