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新托福写作185题库解析—第41题

  41. Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  写作思路:

  41、不同意人类对于农田、房屋和工业的需要要比保护濒危动物重要

  (1)如果不保护濒危动物,那么会对环境造成巨大的破坏

  (2)濒危动物的消失,会为动物学和生物学带来巨大的损失

  (3)再说明人类对于农田、房屋和工业的需要也非常重要,但是保护濒危动物也是必要的。

  参考范文:

  In the past, there have been many endangered animals. Now they are extinct. Does it matter? Has our environment been affected by their absence? Has the quality of our own life been changed?The answer to these questions is "Yes."

  It does matter if we destroy an endangered species habitat to develop more farmland, housing or industrial parks. There is a delicate balance of nature. If one small part is removed, it will affect all the other parts. For example, if certain trees are cut down, bats will have no place to roost. If they cannot roost, they cannot breed. If there are no bats, there will be no animal, or bird to eat certain insects that plague our crops.

  Our environment has been affected by the absence of certain animals. Certain flowers are pollinated by butterflies which migrate from Canada to Mexico. Some of the breeding grounds of these butterflies were destroyed. Now these flowers are disappearing from certain areas. We will no longer be able to enjoy their beauty.

  The quality of our life has been changed. America used to be covered with giant trees. Now we have to visit them in one small park. Rainforests around the world are being cut down to make room for humans. We will never be able to see or study this fragile ecosystem.

  I would encourage us humans to look for other alternatives for our farmlands, housing, and industries. We have alternatives; the animals do not.