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  Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are busy with doing too many things at a time, so they cannot do anything well.

  Is there any possibility that people can do things well when they have many things to do at a time? Or are there any other reasons that lead to the working deficiency? Actually, doing too many things at a time acts as a scapegoat for the unjust saying that people can’t do things well for quite some time.

  To begin with, people can do things well even when they have too many things to do at a time. Michael Jackson is a great convincing example. As the king of pop, to do many things at a time is to take a potluck. Isn’t he that was writing songs when at the same time he had to practice the song himself? Isn’t he that was making the wonderful dance design when at the same time he had to practice the dance as well? He was also the director of his MTV and he bore the great responsibility of the good will ambassador. Could you ever found any fault with his works? Even if there is nothing in the world that is perfect, people do actually have difficulty in getting the exact word to describe Michael’s works of art. It’s unjust when people contribute their working deficiency to the number of things they are doing as long as Michael ever lived.

  Secondly, if working deficiency exists, that is because people can’t focus themselves on what they are doing. It’s human nature that people tend to be absent-minded. It’s easy to understand when you come into the classroom finding the boys’ and girls’ eyes seeing upward far away from the blackboard; it’s easily understandable when you come into offices finding office ladies’ and gentle men’s eyes fixed on their msn or QQ far away from the documents they have to read. Could the student ever know a single subject well or the office white-collar ever fully understand their documents well half-hearted? Is there any excuse when people have only one thing to do and still can’t do it well? The number of things has nothing to do with the working efficiency. If there is someone to blame, it is the people who can’t concentrate.

  In fact, when doing many things at a time, miracles may happen. Archimede got the law of floatation when he was bathing, thinking; Leonardo da Vinci got his mysterious and forever glorious Mona Lisa when he was studying anatomy and scenography. When people are doing many things at a time, they get inspired.

  It’s time that we cleared the name. If people can’t do things well next time, they should first check whether they pay full attention or not and then, if possible, try to create chances to do things at a time and get inspired. (457 words)

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