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新东方史禺托福写作笔记:写作细节

1.Main point如何确立?

根据题库可将作文题目分成四类:

1.1A+-型:一个事物的正负面影响

Example 154

Hook

Imp + contro

Bridge

Parents and educators find themselves constantly confrontment with the question, “are……问题?

A+

MP

I believe the answer is yes.

A+1

Provide incentives

A+2

Improve on weaknesses

A+3

Con

A-

MP

I believe the answer is no.

 

A-1

Create excessive stress

A-2

Harm all around development

A-3

Con

A+>A-

MP

I believe the answer is a qualified yes, despite some negative consequences, scores often far more benefit.

A+1

A+2

A-1

A->A+

MP

I believe the answer is a qualified no, despite some benefit consequences, scores often far more negative.

A+>A-/A-.A+although; despite the fact that; despite.

Example:

Although/despite the fact that it gives rise to problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

Despite some problems and challenges, A brings greater benefits.

Example 144

A+-

MP

I believe the answer is yes and no. scores are mixed blessings.

On the one hand

A+ on the one hand, scores encourages students to study harder.

A+1.

A+2…

On the other hand

A- on the other hand, scores can have negative consequences.

A-1

A-2…

Example 74

Hook

Imp + contro

Bridge

设问

A-

MP

I agree with this opinion.

A-1

Harms health

A-2

Impacts learning

A-3

Leads to rises in crimes

Con

A+

MP

I disagree with this opinion.

A+1

Disseminate inter

A+2

Enhance learning

A+3

Improve friendship

Con

A->A+

MP

Basically (Essentially), I agree with this opinion. Although it offers some benefits, television has far more negative impacts.

A-1

A-2

A+1

A+-

MP

I believe television is a mixed blession.

On the one hand, A+

On the one hand, A-

Case by case

MP

My stance should be determined on a case by case basis.

Educational programs promote the development of adolescents.

Case1

Discovery series —scientific facts and theories

Case2

Family album — language learning

Inappropriate or indecent programs have harmful effects.

Case1

Smoking scene —harm health

Case2

Sex and violence content —commit

Con