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雅思地图题小作文写作满分范文:校园规模变化


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本文针对常规题型的雅思小作文地图题范文,话题是某学校预计20年后的校园规模变化,全文共183词,9分级。

2018最新雅思Task1写作满分范文 地图题之学校变迁图1

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

该地图展示某校在2004年的校址及规划中的2024年的校址。请作答。

雅思图表小作文地图题9分范文:

The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024.

It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students.

In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed. Furthermore, the plan is to join the two original buildings together, creating a shorter path that links the buildings only.

As the third building and a second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field, a new, smaller sports field will need to be laid. A new road will also be built from the main entrance to the second car park. Finally, no changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.

(183 words, band 9)

附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路

段一:话题重述

段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律

段三:详述特征规律一

段四:详述特征规律二

注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。