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雅思写作“见官死”开头完全曝光(下)

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      “见官死”开头之六:过分简单 没有重点 ( 喷血指数:☆☆ )
      典型失败案例:
      Topic-The importance of environmental protection
      This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

      “见官死”开头之七:用词不当 表达不准 ( 喷血指数:☆☆ )
      典型失败案例:
      Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
      I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

      “见官死”开头之八:意思重复 原地踏步 ( 喷血指数:☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例:
      Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
      My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

      “见官死”开头之九:中国俗语 胡乱翻译 ( 喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例:
      Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?
      I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
      正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children
      Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
      Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
      Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
      Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
     I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

      “见官死”开头之十:观点武断 态度强硬 ( 喷血指数:☆☆☆ )
      典型失败案例:
      Topic1-The importance of confidence
      In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.