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V116 Some information in films, books and on the Internet has had influence on young people, and even on society. Some think such information should be controlled/censored. Discuss both sides and state your opinion. You should use your own experience or examples.
 
Nowadays, sa(?) we are3(?) lieing(?) in a high technologic country, there are many advanced media surrounding us, which enrich our leasure(leisure) times and assist our professional research However, some people complain that the government should reduce the use of these media among young people. From my point of view, I would say these media both have advantages and disadvantages for the youngth(young). We should look at all of the aspects carefully.
 
Reading more books and watching more films would broaden ou(our) minds. Because we read different kinds of books and obtain different information form films, we are able to acknowledge(know) different cultures in many countries. We would have more opportunities to meet various friends who come from overseas, as we have known their backgrounds and we have a lot of things in common.
 
Another important reason for these media is they(?) make things quicker. Take the internet for example, it not only has a huge rangs(range) of information ,but also would help us to select what sort of material we accurately(exactly) need in a few seconds
 
Although these kind(s) of media are convenient ,they still have some drawbacks. Committing crimes should be recognized as the main disadvantage of those media. According to an analysis in an academic magazine ,a quarter of the crimes were committed by young people and over 50% of them were committed by watching violent movies and reading sexual plots( pornography ) on the internet. Those young people have disturbed our stable living environment((???)). Some doctors reported that most older than 15 years old young patients go wound(?) because of imitating the Gong Fu Stars' actions. As far as protecting young people's lives is concerned, the government should control the times of programs which invoves(involves) some over exciting plots(?).