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C8A1-Task 2

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A child’s education has never been learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.

However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.

But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

范文分析:

思路

本文的第一段重申问题背景,提出作者个人观点

第二、三段对问题进行讨论

最后一段对文章进行总结

 

第一段主题句Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

第二段主题句Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents.

第三段主题句However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home.

第四段主题句It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

结构

一般说来,在段落之间,没有特别的连接词,暗指后面一段在支持前面一段的主题句。

段落之间的关联词:

3rd段首,考官使用However, 表示切换话题。

 

一般说来,在一个段落内的句子之间,没有特别的连接词,暗指后面一句在支持主题句。

段落中的路标词:

在第一段中,考官使用了therefore来突出主题句。这个词可以理解为总之

语法

全文使用的长难句型如下:

In order to

They will certainly be the first to

It is something that

词汇

必备词汇:(掌握核心动词)注明:()里的数字代表这个词在文章中出现的次数,因此使用同一个词在文章中,只要把握好度,并不会带来太大的影响。其他没有标注()的词在原文中只出现过一次。

Include, respect, obey rules, share, be expected to, behave, achieve, co-operate with

 

亮点词汇:

be the responsibility of

a whole variety of backgrounds

valuable

take responsibility for