雅思图表作文的本质:对比对照(比较结构句型)
趋势描述(上升,下降)
上升的动词:increase, rise, surge, enlarge , swell , soar, enhance, climb, jump, augment , go up
下降的动词:decrease, descend , decline, drop, shrink, [wv]diminish[/vw], dwindle , taper
形容动词的副词:considerably, sharply, remarkably , dramatically, greatly, drastically , extremely, steadily, substantially , continually, continuously, moderately , respectively, generally, slightly, mainly, strikingly
例子文章:
Stock prices have been extremely volatile . They climbed steadily in the 1950’s, reached a peak in 1966, and then fluctuate d up and down until 1973, when they fell sharply. Stock prices had recovered substantially by the early 1980s when a major stock market boom again, sending to Dow Jones Industry Average (DJIA) to a peak of 2722 on August 25,1987. After a 17% decline over the next month and a half, the stock market experienced the worst one-day drop in its entire history on “Black Monday”, October 19, 1987, when the DJIA fell by more than 500 points, a 22% decline.
句型的变化:
1. 主体做主语+increase
Between 1940 and 1985 the proportion of the elderly people increased remarkably from about 17% in Sweden and 9% in the USA to 13% and 15% respectively .
2. 年代做主语+saw + increase
The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a generally steady increase in the proportion of …
3.地点做主语+experienced +increase
Both the USA and Sweden experience d an alarming/moderately surge/increase in the proportion of…
写作时首段应是命题的改写
主体段应描写大的特征或大趋势的概括(关键数据支持)
关键数据即起点终点坐标,最大最小值,偶尔会用交点坐标,部分特征拐点坐标。
得分注意点:
1. 句子的衔接和句子结构的变化
2. 分词和比较结构的使用
3. 从句的使用
4. 整篇文章万万不可主观推理分析,否则扣分
首段是信息段,不能照抄命题,只能改写命题,概括主要的研究内容,研究对象,时间和地点。如果是两个图,必须分开来写,句型常用while...shows…,…illustrate … (剑五P52,剑四P100剑四P54)
For example:
(首段)The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion of the elderly people to the population of the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 till today. Also the chart gives predicte d date for the trends.
(主体段)Since 1940, the proportion in the USA has been slightly higher than that in Sweden at any given time, while that in Japan was always the smallest. Specially, the figures for the three countries in 1940 were 9%, 7%, 5% respectively. The changes in the proportion in the USA and Sweden are feature d mainly by steady increase although since 1980 the USA experienced somewhat declines. By contrast , Japan did not see increase substantially, sending it to a peak of 5% in 2007, the same as in 1940. According to the prediction since 2000, the upward trends will have been obvious in the three countries, but in Japan will soar at the fastest speed. Till/By 2040 the figure will have reached 27%, compare d with25% in the USA and 23% in Sweden.