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雅思小作文自我检查列表

  对于自己复习的雅思考生,在雅思写作的过程中最难提高的是没有人帮助修改,不知道作文写了哪里有错误,下面雅思小编为大家分享一名雅思考官曾经写过的作文修改列表,备考雅思的同学对着这个列表修改小作文,可以在一定程度上有所提升。

  A checklist for part 1 graphs, charts and tables

  In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information from the diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is to decide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process. One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw the chart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do and so to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and a practice suggestion.

  雅思作文检查列表 Checklist

  Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. I suggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”to all the questions.

  1. Type of diagram 图表类型

  Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/pie chart/flow chart/table?

  有没有说清楚这个一个什么样的图表----柱状图?线图?饼图?还是流程图?

  2. The correct tense 时态

  Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to past time, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not just using the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.

  有没有运用正确的时态呢?要记住,不止要用对时态,还要再小作文中写清具体的时间!

  3. The subjects 对象

  Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram? Even if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example, you still need to refer to them all in your report.

  所有图表中所提到的对象都写进小作文了吗?如果图表里提到8个国家,全部都要写进去哦~

  4. Units

  Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time (months/years etc), money (millions of £) or simple numbers (10,000s). To do this, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.

  单位写清楚了吗?X轴和Y轴上的单位都要看清楚哦~

  5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest

  Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all charts and graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame for understanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may not include every extreme so you need to use your judgement.