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剑桥雅思考官写作9分范文:小孩有偿工作

本范文来自剑桥雅思,是近乎9分的存在。江湖有言:熟读剑雅一百遍,不会作文也会吟。你是拿来无脑背诵也好,一篇一篇品评研究也好,照着葫芦画瓢也好,都是对你的写作大有裨益的。个人建议:重点学习考官是如何入题,如何立论,如何论述,如何结尾,还有如何承接过渡的。总之就是学习这些范文的骨架是如何搭建的。

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.小孩从事一些样式的有偿工作,对与错?

What are your opinions on this?

雅思官方参考范文:
The issue of children doing paid work is a complex and sensitive one. It is difficult to say who has the right to judge whether children working is ‘wrong’ or ‘valuable’. Opinions will also differ as to ‘learning’ benefits; no doubt teachers and factory owner, for example, would have varying concerns.

An important consideration is the kind of work undertaken. Young children doing arduous and repetitive tasks on a factory production line, for example, are less likely to be ‘learning’ than older children helping in an old people’s home. There are health and safety issues to be considered as well. It is an unfortunate fact that many employers may prefer to use the services of children simply to save money by paying them less than adults and it is this type of exploitation that should be discouraged.
However, in many countries children work because their families need the additional income, no matter how small. This was certainly the case in the past in many industrialized countries, and it is very difficult to judge that it is wrong for children today to contribute to the family income in this way.

Nevertheless, in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time paid work or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, the undoubtedly of value in children’s development.