徐小平
范例11.1 提要
申请者概况
男性，生物学博士，去美国国家健康研究中心做博士后研究，两万八干美元的资助，J1签证
拒签理由
没有足够的语言能力
申诉重点
重点强调自己是一个高水平的研究者，而非一般的青年学生对方邀请者是国家级的专家，如果不是自己有特别的能力，对方不会给录取，更不会给钱英语能力当然是录取过程中的一个因素，否则对方是不会录取一个哑巴的作为高水平的科学家，我只和基因和细胞对话英语口语对于我的研究工作确实不是那么重要，当然，我可以很容易地很快提高这个能力我已经作出了努力在著名的北京新东方学校上一个口语班反复强调我的研究水平和地位，美国不要我这种级别的人物就亏大了
范例11.2 原文
Dear Visa Officer ,
With great excitement and optimism ,I received a fellowship from National Institutes ofHealth from the United States. But to my disappointment ,my visa application was re-jected twice on the ground of non-sufficient English. I understand the refusal butwould like to let you know more about my case. I believe you will grant me a visa afterreading this letter :
I am not an ordinary young man seeking admission to your country lor better educationand opportunity. But rather I am an established molecular biologist who is going to do avery advanced research program at your country's top medical research institute , NIH. Iwas invited by Dr. Jesey Fang ,Head of Genetic Section of Laboratory of Reproductiveand Developmental Toxicology at National Institute of Health.
A known scientist at the NIH, Dr. Fang has lots of visiting scholars around the worldto conduct research in her lab. She is very strict in selecting applicants particularlywhen it comes to a coveted fellowship such like the one she awarded me. If it were notfor my excellent research work , she would not have selected me for such a prestigiousaward. Nor she would have selected somebody who can not communicate in English ather Lab in the National Institute of Health.
I do not deny that my spoken English is not as strong as my writing and reading ability(I have even published research papers in English magazines). However, as a researchexpert deep into the unknown world of hunlan genes and cells, I have devoted all myadult life to decode many unanswered medical questions that prevent the human beingsfrom achieving healthier, longer and happier lives. Instead of talking to people at thetime like you visa officers do every day, I spend most of my working hours talking togenes and cells (who do not speak human languages). I am very proud of my job done and very proud of the fact that my research work has been recognized by internationally known molecular biologists such as Dr. Fang at the National Institute of Health ! Myspoken English is good enough to conduct my research in the NIH.
Spoken English is important ,however , this is an ability I just improperly neglected be-cause I have concentrated my energy on my field of research. I can certainly improvemy oral English rapidly. (I have already registered an Spoken English Course atBeijing's most famous language school, New Oriental School to improve my speakingskills ) .
